Before I send this, what will my reader actually hear?

I’m about to send the message below to . I’m not going to tell you what I meant by it, because they won’t have that either. Don’t edit it. Read it once, the way they would, and tell me four things: what you think I’m saying or asking for, in one sentence; the point where your attention would drift; one line you could take the wrong way, and how; and the question you’d be left with at the end. Don’t reassure me, and don’t invent trouble to fill the list: if a part reads fine, say so. Afterward I’ll tell you what I meant and we can look at the gap. Here is the draft: Be direct. No padding and no reassurance I did not ask for.